Dear Parents,
I am writing this letter because I think that living on a ground floor house with a front lawn is better than an apartment.
Many citizens and celebrities would agree with me. Many of them live in those kind of houses. I will give reasons and facts to support my opinion.
First reasons is that we will be able to keep a dog. Our family wants a dog right? In an apartment we can't do that as there will be complaints of noise and smell.
The second reason is that having a front lawn could make us exercise more. we could play football, have a trampoline and etc.
Final reasons is that it's more dangerous living in an apartment. Data shows that there are many apartment fires. Living in an apartment it will be hard to escape fires. Also it is easy for the fires to spread, it is safer to live in an ground floor house. http://www.nfpa.org/research/fire-statistics/the-us-fire-problem/apartment-structure-fires This link shows the data for this year and the past. I recommend living in a house for our safety.
The facts and reasons show that it is better living in a house. I hope you consider my argument. I will help during your decision.
From,
Jang Jun Hyeok
I am writing this letter because I think that living on a ground floor house with a front lawn is better than an apartment.
Many citizens and celebrities would agree with me. Many of them live in those kind of houses. I will give reasons and facts to support my opinion.
First reasons is that we will be able to keep a dog. Our family wants a dog right? In an apartment we can't do that as there will be complaints of noise and smell.
The second reason is that having a front lawn could make us exercise more. we could play football, have a trampoline and etc.
Final reasons is that it's more dangerous living in an apartment. Data shows that there are many apartment fires. Living in an apartment it will be hard to escape fires. Also it is easy for the fires to spread, it is safer to live in an ground floor house. http://www.nfpa.org/research/fire-statistics/the-us-fire-problem/apartment-structure-fires This link shows the data for this year and the past. I recommend living in a house for our safety.
The facts and reasons show that it is better living in a house. I hope you consider my argument. I will help during your decision.
From,
Jang Jun Hyeok
I liked your letter, but I have some questions. Do you know about the dangers of fires in houses? And you didn't consider the fact that houses are much more expensive so only rich people like celebrities live there and houses are much harder to keep clean. Ex) yards
ReplyDeleteI am living in a house with a front lawn, and it's great!
ReplyDeleteWe can grow vegetable, and eat it right away.
But you should consider the fact that it tends to be noisier in the ground floor
I enjoyed reading your writing!
Jun,
ReplyDeleteYou did a good job with this letter. Using research to support your reasons makes a stronger persuasive letter. Good job!